User:Rain.noakes/Parks Canada/Alalsa1996 Peer Review

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 * Reviewing Rain.noakes section on "Ecological Integrity Monitoring" on the Parks Canada wiki article: Parks Canada

Evaluate the drafted changes
"the idea of conserving nature unimpaired has been part of national parks’ legal mandate since 1930". --> missing closing quotations

Not sure if the citations in parentheses are necessary in wiki articles? ex: (Panel on the Ecological Integrity of Canada’s National Parks, 2000) or (Bridgewater, Kim, & Bosselmann, 2014), etc....

Regardless of the fluidity of the term, there are some common elements, "There are, however, certain common elements found in many definitions: naturalness, wholeness, continuity through time" --> could maybe paraphrase this a bit more so that you don't have to quote from the article.

“The 6 to 8 ecological integrity indicators for each" --> needs a space between to and 8

PCA --> put the abbreviation in parentheses next to "Parks Canada Agency"

Overall it's very detailed, but could maybe use a more neutral tone, sounds a little too academic for wiki?