User:RaisingGoddesses/Princess of Nólsoy/Morganljackson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The student I am evaluation is Raising Goddess. Her assigned article is "Princess of Nolsoy"


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Princess of Nólsoy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:

Both of the photos that were added are from 2017, that may be the most recent photo or painting of her but my classmate could research to see if there is a more recent one.The photo does match this article perfectly because it is a photo of the princess and her husband. I think the fact that the photo is on a stamps allows reader to see that Princess of Nolsoy held some significance in Danish culture. The authors creates an entire section explaining what her photo is and where it came from.

The Tone:

The tone is neutral and the first sentence tells us exactly about the topic. The author does not go off topic because the article talks about the Princess of Nolsoy entire life story.

Sources:

There are 5 sources they are all recently published in 2022. There is an added reading section that is updates and a good addition to this page.

There is nothing in the Sandbox section of my partners wiki. However I can review the article myself.

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