User:Raizaj24/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Homicidal sleepwalking

Article Evaluation
I chose this article because it is an interesting topic and so much more could be added. The article only has the definition, causes, and some cases. There is too little information for such fascinating topic that could make us understand dreams a little more.


 * Sources
 * Popat, Shreeya; Winslade, William “While You Were Sleepwalking: Science and Neurobiology of Sleep Disorders & the Enigma of Legal Responsibility of Violence During Parasomnia”: Neuroethics (2015); 8(2): 203–214.
 * Popat, Shreeya; Winslade, William “While You Were Sleepwalking: Science and Neurobiology of Sleep Disorders & the Enigma of Legal Responsibility of Violence During Parasomnia”: Neuroethics (2015); 8(2): 203–214.

Option 2

 * Gender diversity
 * Article Evaluation
 * This topic can be improved by adding more sections and more relevant information, along with more reliable references. It needs a little organization and concise information, it is not specific as to what topic the article is trying to inform about. It felt like the writer was trying to persuade the reader, so it has to be restructured in a more neutral tone.


 * Sources
 * Herring, Cedric (2009). "Does diversity pay?: Race, gender, and the business case for diversity". Sociological Review. 74 (2)

Option 3

 * Feminist art
 * Article Evaluation
 * Out of the three is the most abundant article. It is very well structured, however it needs an updated. A section could be added in which can be presented how the topic has improved nowadays and what remarkable events have helped spread the concept. I think the history of each year is too extensive, which may be unattractive to the reader, and needs a little summary. Information of more relevance in the existing sections and more sections can be added to expose a vast amount of necessary information.


 * Sources
 * "Feminist art movement". The Art Story Foundation. Retrieved 13 January 2014