User:Ral1092/Sykes' monkey/Cjlewis1204 Peer Review

General info
Ral1092
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ral1092/Sykes' monkey
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sykes' monkey

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello! I would be careful with your lead. There is a lot of information that isn't included in the article body. Any information in the lead needs to be present within the article. I would do more research on those sections to flush them out more. Having more articles to back up information on the wiki would add to the overall quality as well. Sections you should add to the may include : Geographical range, habitat, diet, behavior, reproduction, and predators. The tone you have is great. It is unbiased and focused. The balance will improve as you add other sections with more information. I think what you have right now is a great start. My advice would be to start with the information in your lead section. Start with more research based on that information and create sections based on what is there. Just make sure that any information included in your lead is explained further in your article! Good luck!