User:Rambo's Revenge/PremierePR

Stuff from the now closed peer review to address. I am using this as a checklist
Ruhrfisch comments: Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here. Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 15:39, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
 * The lead should be an accessible and inviting overview of the whole article. Nothing important should be in the lead only - since it is a summary, it should all be repeated in the body of the article itself but ... financial penalties imposed for filming outside the "30-mile zone".[5] seems to only be in the lead. My rule of thumb is to include every header in the lead in some way. Please see WP:LEAD
 * Provide context to the reader - the same ... financial penalties imposed for filming outside the "30-mile zone".[5] is unexplained in the Filming section or elsewhere in the article that I could see. See WP:PCR
 * The plot section seems to be overly detailed - a commercial break is not really part of the plot, couldn't is just be "Later..."? Also make sure the plot is described from an out of universe perspective - see WP:IN-U.
 * Article could use a copyedit "it's" is used where "its" (possessive) is meant, there are other spots that need polish.

Comments from
 * What makes the following sources reliable?
 * http://www.seeing-stars.com/
 * Comment. I would say it is reliable. It is a self-published source by someone who has become an expert in that field and gained coverage in relaible third party publications like LA Times & Daily News (LA) ,. Rambo's Revenge  (talk)  10:00, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
 * http://www.hollywood.com/
 * Comment I believe hollywood.com is okay because "Hollywood.com is owned by R&S Investments, LLC, which is owned by Mitchell Rubenstein and Laurie Silvers, who previously founded the Sci-Fi Channel. The President and Chief Operating Officer of Hollywood.com is Kevin Davis, who formerly was Vice President and General Manager of Variety.com." Also, it appears there is a Hollywood.com tv cable channel in the US. Rambo's Revenge  (talk)  10:28, 18 October 2008 (UTC).