User:Ramirez4422/Javier Marín/ALGcreate Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ramirez4422


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ramirez4422/Javier Marín
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Javier Marín

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi!

The lead is well written and provides concise information. Some suggestions to help expand a biography section: add information about the artist's early life, or where they went to school.

A few grammatical suggestions to help the flow. For the last sentence that starts with "Later in 1986...", since the event already occurred, change it to past tense: "sets" to "set" and "exposes" to "exposed". Add a colon after "Such places include" to indicate a list is following.

Also, are there any links to reference the artist's work being displayed at these museums? There are not any linked sources to where this information was coming from to back it up.