User:Ramirezd2/Capacocha/Jennyfayfay Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ramirezd2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ramirezd2/Capacocha?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Capacocha

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, I think the section you contributed goes well with the topic of the article. It is detailed, concise, and seems to have a neutral standing point. I liked how you mentioned things that are shared between your site and the others mentioned. There are a few places that need editing like adding a comma in "6130" and using hyphens for "12 year old". I think one thing you could potentially add to your section is details about what specific items meant to your particular site. What did other archeologists believe? What do people think now about these sacrifices? Are there legends, or stories available today talking about these things?

I think your section could definitely benefit from some images. One could be the location of the site on the map. The other can be a picture of the actual site and objects found there. The description you provided is good, it's just that I think an image would make it clearer.