User:Ranceur/Faculty psychology/FrogMonkey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * JABTdaniel, JoeBreach, Ranceur, Raymond8819

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ranceur/Faculty_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Faculty psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Expand on the metaphor. It is still unclear why the term faculty psychology is related to pocketknives.

“psychology, using a metaphor, being the pocket knife brain.” Need for clarification, not coherent. Wording of the metaphor could be more cohesive; the metaphor is to the pocketknife, not the pocket knife brain.


 * Reworded for you: In Seven and a Half Lessons About the Brain, Lisa Feldman Barrett describes faculty psychology using a metaphor that compares a pocketknife to the brain. This illustrate the way a mind is separated into different sections that serve their own purpose just like a pocketknife.

A general necessity for expansion of all the ideas presented in the paragraph.

We like how you used the book from class to assure that you had reliable sources.

Good job!