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Hamilton E. Holmes (8 July 1941 – 26 October 1995) was an American orthopedic physician. He and Charlayne Hunter-Gault were the first two African-American students admitted to the University of Georgia. Additionally, Holmes was the first African-American student to attend the Emory University School of Medicine, where he earned his M.D. in 1967, later becoming a professor of orthopedics and associate dean at the school.

Early life
Holmes was born July 8, 1941 in Atlanta, Georgia. His father, Alfred, was an Atlanta businessman and his mother, Isabella, was a teacher. His grandfather, Hamilton Mayo Holmes, was a physician, and was one of Hamilton's influences. In his high school years, Holmes attended Henry McNeal Turner High School, which at the time was considered one of the most prestigious high schools for African-Americans in Atlanta. He graduated in 1959 as valedictorian.

Time at UGA
After graduating from high school, Holmes, along with fellow Henry McNeal Turner High School graduate Charlayne Hunter, applied to the University of Georgia in the fall of 1959; however, both were denied. After this, Holmes enrolled at Morehouse College, while he and Hunter continued to apply to the University of Georgia every quarter. In January of 1961, both Holmes and Hunter were admitted to UGA. When they arrived on campus, they were met with cheers of "Two, four, six, eight. We don't want to integrate!"

During his time at UGA, Holmes would generally keep to himself. He lived off campus, and on the weekends, he would return home to Atlanta. Holmes was a member of Phi Beta Kappa fraternity and Phi Kappa Phi Honors fraternity.

Medical Career
After graduating from the University of Georgia, Holmes became the first African-American student to be accepted to the Emory University School of Medicine. He graduated in 1967 and began his residency at Detroit General Hospital. He then left in 1969 to serve as an army ranger in Germany, before returning to Emory to complete his residency. He eventually opened up a private practice in Atlanta, became the medical director and head orthopedic surgeon at Grady Memorial Hospital.

Personal life
Holmes was married to Marilyn Vincent Holmes. They had two children; a son, Hamilton Jr. and a daughter, Alison.

Holmes died in 1995 of heart failure in Atlanta, Georgia.

Legacy
For many years after graduating, Holmes stayed away from the University of Georgia, stating that his "time as a student there was very bad". In the early 1980s, Holmes agreed to help plan the university's bicentennial celebration and became the university's first African-American to be on the Board of Trustees.

The Atlanta native has several landmarks named in his honor including the Hamilton E. Holmes Elementary School in East Point, Georgia; Hamilton E. Holmes Drive (Highway 280) in Fulton County, Georgia; and the H.E. Holmes MARTA station in Atlanta. The first endowed professorship at the University of Georgia named for an African-American was created in his name on 11 November 1999. The University of Georgia Academic Building is named for him as well, along with Charlayne Hunter-Gault, as it is called the Holmes/Hunter Academic Building, as of 2001. Also in 2012, Emory University has dedicated a new dorm in his honor, called Hamilton Holmes Hall.

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Drafting Article Ideas
There needs to be at least two different sections added; Career and Personal Life. The information from the two current articles can help fill those sections.

There isn't much information about what actually happened when he went to UGA. If any information can be found about this, then a section about his time at UGA may be added as well.

I believe the last two sentences in the lead section can be moved; the one about his fraternity to either the Early life section or the future Career section, and the one about his death to either the future Personal Life section or add a section for that entirely.

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I chose to edit the article over Hamilton E. Holmes, the first African-American man to attend the University of Georgia. I will add some details about his personal life and add a section discussing his medical career as well. I will also add in some references wherever they are needed.

Article Evaluation
In the article “Digital continuity”, all the information appears to be relevant and there was nothing that distracted me. The article had a neutral point of view with no biases in it. The “Focus of digital continuity” section seemed a little underrepresented. There was a sentence that gave a definition of “business continuity”, but it did not have a link when it should have. All but one link worked and they all supported the claims made. The only fact that wasn’t referenced was the business continuity definition. The rest were all referenced properly. Some of the references were over 15 years old, so there should be newer information added to it. The only conversation in the Talk section was about separating information. The article was rated as Star-Class. It was a part of the Digital Preservation and Computing WikiProjects.