User:Raniya 03/Rumination (psychology)/Akeiah Peer Review

General info
Raniya
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Raniya 03/Rumination (psychology)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Rumination (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Raniya did an excellent job identifying the needs of the article and improving it. The original article only included one form of treatment, but she found another form of therapy and expanded on the currently listed therapy. She also linked one study to mindful-based cognitive therapy, making it more informative. It would be better to find another study that aligns with this information. She updated the introduction section to include the new information and bolded the information she provided, making it easier to differentiate between past edits and her contributions. I believe she is moving in the right direction, and with more supporting studies, she will be a great asset to this article.