User:Raniya 03/Rumination (psychology)/Mrwil8 Peer Review

General info
Raniya 03 - Rumination
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Great lead! I may suggest moving the definition and it's goals to the first part of the lead! To give the reader an insight on what rumination is within the first few sentences, other than that, your lead is straight to the point, and very clear, I noticed where you also input the disclaimer about further research needing to be provided, which maybe a subtle note but it shows that you're involved and well informed about the topic and it's current development of research and information!

Body: Wonderful body! My only suggestion here is the same as the first! Perhaps swap around the definition and goals of Mindful Based Cognitive Behavioral Therapy! Other than that, your information is well organized and clear, with plenty of examples in a easy to read but packed with information format! Keep up the good work!