User:Raquel Gilliland/Planktivore/AleahHahn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Raquel and Group: Planktivore


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Raquel%20Gilliland/Planktivore?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * I think overall you wrote well. I think my primary concern is the layout and organization of your article. You have some really chunky sections that could either be split up and some small sections that could be combined to make it a more appealing article to read.

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)