User:Raquellegher/Maria Teresa Silveira de Barros Camargo/Empro23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Raquellegher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Raquellegher/Maria Teresa Silveira de Barros Camargo


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Raquellegher/Maria Teresa Silveira de Barros Camargo

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content of this article is relevant to its subject. There seems to be some missing content however, in terms of the subject's life and the chronological order of events. The article does deal with Wikipedia's equity gaps; its subject is a woman activist from Brazil. The content is neutral, there are no persuasive elements. There are no citations listed on the article, so it does not yet meet Wikipedia's notability requirements. There were several spelling and grammatical errors.