User:Raquellegher/Maria Teresa Silveira de Barros Camargo/Jada.barrett Peer Review

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Peer Review Note from Jada Barrett
Hello,

I hope this note finds you well as you work through this draft! Thank you for allowing me to peer review your work. As I was reading your page, I was impressed by the amount of information you could find on her personal life and career as well, I believe it gives readers insight into what kind of personality Barros Camargo had. In an effort to increase neutrality, consider removing the phrase "a woman ahead of her time," as that can show readers a certain position you have on the woman you are writing about. If possible, can you find more information about what she did as a congress woman?