User:Raquellegher/Maria Teresa Silveira de Barros Camargo/Lif704 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There needs to be citations throughout the page, about every sentence or two there should be a citation. Try to keep the writing in a neutral tone and have things sound more factual. Also, check for grammar.