User:Raquelycaza/Amargosa River/BigToe42 Peer Review

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(Raquelycaza)
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Some grammatical errors in first wildlife paragraph, capitalizing the endangered species. Might also be good to add links to each species Wikipedia article if they have one.

Maybe add some specific projects The Nature Conservancy has done in the River Project to give readers an idea of the kind of restoration projects done. Are there any other endemic plant species like Amargosa Nitterwort that you can add to the paragraph?

Overall really great additions, I especially like how your wording. It comes off very professional and matter of fact.

Thank you so much! I made changes to the grammatical errors, unfortunately the endangered species listed were not able to link with other articles. Thank you for the feedback! -Raquel