User:Raquelycaza/Amargosa River/Shadowlifts Peer Review

General info
Raquelycaza
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Raquelycaza/Amargosa River
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Amargosa River

Evaluate the drafted changes
The addition to the article seems to be a new section on wildlife and conservation efforts in the Armagosa area. I love the paragraph added it is very informative and adds quite a bit of important information lacking in the first article. The sources seem to span from the early 2000s up to 2021 and seem therefore current and accurate. The sources are mostly from conservancy and governmental organizations. The additions are clear and worded in an understandable manner. The tone is neutral and does not seem biased.

The additions definitely made the article feel more complete, as it is adding a critical component to any ecosystem, the wildlife. I also think it is necessary to discuss the conservation efforts. I think perhaps an addition of some photos of the wildlife mentioned would add to the article.

Thank you so much for the feedback, I appreciate it! -raquel