User:Rashaaasfour/Colorado tick fever/Shayna F Peer Review

General info
User: Rashaaasfour and Yogilover3(?) who is updating Colorado tick fever
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rashaaasfour/Colorado tick fever
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Colorado tick fever

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead and content/organization:

The lead is very good, represents the subject being written about, and is too the point and not overly detailed. It flows really well with the content. And the content inside is very good, the writing style is impressive and eye-catching. It relates well with the other sections to the article and does not explain anything that has already been discussed in the original writing.

Tone and Balance:

The tone is neutral and consistent throughout the writing. It takes a professional and strong point on the over all topics. It feels like the same typing of tone and balance you would read in a academic paper/textbook. You did a really good job on this.

Sources and references:

You might find it helpful to use a more recent source for the Virology section, if there one available. All of the source properly reflect what is being cited, but it would be really nice to see some more of the information for the second source and maybe more information on the ticks overall.

Overall impressions:

This is well written, and has improve the quality of the article being edited. It flows nicely, is eye catching, and reads well. It adds important information that is needed in the article that people are more likely to look for and read. I would love to see some more over information over the ticks, but overall, it is amazing work.

Respond to review
Hey Shayna F,

Thank you for taking the time to review my article. I tried very hard to keep this neutral and more formal, so I really do appreciate your supportive comments and detailed feedback. This was a tricky topic to find a lot of information on. I believe the sources I have are the most current available, but will double check and see if I can find anything else.

Thanks, Yogilover3