User:Rashanmarcus/Child sexual abuse/Jpow05 Peer Review

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There is nothing to really add, so I will just post a portion of the article and edit it myself and then provide a bit of feedback.

Child sexual abuse (CSA), also called child molestation, is a form of child abuse in which an adult or older adolescent uses a child for sexual stimulation. Forms of child sexual abuse include engaging in sexual activities with a child (whether by asking or pressuring, or by other means), indecent exposure, child grooming, and child sexual exploitation, such as using a child to produce child pornography [NOTE: i believe you can delete the previous sentence as it is explaiend further on in the article.].

CSA is not confined to specific settings; it permeates various institutions and communities. CSA can happen at any time, any place, and to any child. CSA affects children in all socioeconomic levels, across all racial, ethnic, and cultural groups, and in both rural and urban areas. Schools, homes, and online spaces are just a few contexts where minors are vulnerable to abuse and exploitation.(in places where child labor is common) [NOTE: add on to this sentence, there is nothing that correlates to child labor.] . Child marriage is one of the main forms of child sexual abuse; UNICEF has stated that child marriage "represents perhaps the most prevalent form of sexual abuse and exploitation of girls". The effects of child sexual abuse can include depression, post-traumatic stress disorder, anxiety, complex post-traumatic stress disorder,[not in body] and physical injury to the child, among other problems. Sexual abuse by a family member is a form of incest and can result in more serious and long-term psychological trauma, especially in the case of parental incest.

I added my small portion of what to add because I was not sure what to edit as there is nothing there. I believe this article has some very good points to it and provides some dark but very accurate information about what can happen during CSA. Some of the articles in the reference section are a bit out of date, some being in the late 1990s and early 2000s. I believe to add on to this article, you can find some more up to date information about this topic and either replace or add on to the points the author made in the original article for your draft.