User:Rav holmes/Janina Jeff/BethC244. Peer Review

If you can try adding a link to the website. (Kinkofa.com)

The second sentence, I would explain more on what exactly they are preserving?

I would name some of the organizations that they are partnered with.

The last sentence is pretty long. I would see if you can break it up into multiple sentences, it is just hard to read at first.

I would add the title and a link to the podcast.

Great Job :)

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