User:Ravanvoo/- Capitalocene/HRVEF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ravanvoo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ravanvoo/- Capitalocene


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Ravanvoo/- Capitalocene

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft's content is coherent, and properly resourced. I understand that the topic of this particular portion of the article is directly correlated with Patel and Moore's book, but the author does a proficient job of finding a variety of resources to draw from when discussing cheapening as a concept of capitalism. I think the draft would benefit from a section that acknowledges criticisms or disbelief in cheapening in order to provide more perspective if it is available. The draft could also be improved upon in the reparations ecology section by describing how the Capitalocene could be affected by the exposure of capitalism's intrinsic cheapening.