User:RavensandStars/Cassandra/Crocaholic Peer Review

Evaluate the drafted changes
There isn't a lot for me to edit from your sandbox but, looking at your article and what you plan on editing, I would suggest rephrasing the first part of the wiki article. It is a really long part that pretty much gives the entire article away rather than giving a preview. I might also just make the article look a little more clean, putting together paragraphs of things rather than just having one random line here and there. When it talks about Agamemnon too I would relate it back to her rather than just having it in there. Make a section such as- Works Cassandra appears in or something along those lines. I also like the images you're planning to add because they seem to make it a little more visual for the reader. Lastly, I might also move further reading before the sources and bibliography because you should end on sources in most things. There might be some grammar that is needed and such but I think you have a great start.