User:Ray Ray 2time/Veterans Memorial Boulevard/Arielleb02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ray Ray 2time


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ray Ray 2time/Veterans Memorial Boulevard


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Veterans Memorial Boulevard

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was pretty good, but there are no citations. The tone of the article so far is neutral, so that's good. Overall the article needs more information, and citations