User:Ray Ray 2time/Veterans Memorial Boulevard/Hailey959 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Ray Ray 2time )


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ray Ray 2time/Veterans Memorial Boulevard


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article contains very descriptive and useful information for readers. I really liked how you described how to get to the avenue from a certain direction. I think this is a really good start but I think that a structure needs to be formed in order to flush out a better article. Essentially I also think that you should add more information on maybe events that have happened along the boulevard or any fun facts to add some content to the article. Also some visuals would add great as well as an inforbox.