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Properties of 2-Methyl-3-Pentanol
Molecular Formula: C6H14O Molar Mass: 102.17 g/mol Melting Point: N/A Boiling Point: 128°C Solubility in Water: 20 g/L 2-methyl-3-pentanol

2-Methyl-3-Pentanol Wikipedia Article
2-Methyl-3-Pentanol

Sigma-Aldrich Catalogue Entry
2-Methyl-3-Pentanol

Three Articles Not Provided By the Wikipedia Article
The Action of Diethylmagnesium Upon the Methyl Substituted Derivatives of Epoxyethane Determination of Vapor Pressures and Vaporization Enthalpies of the Aliphatic Branched C5 and C6 Alcohols Studies in Ozonolysis. IV. Steric Effects in Determining the Existence of the Molozonide

Critique of Carbonic Anhydrase Mechanism Figure
The figure uploaded by Bilal.bhatti96 shows the cyclic mechanism for Carbonic Anhydrase, which can be deemed quite difficult to understand where the beginning and end of the mechanism stand. Bilal.bhatti96 does a poor job in explaining what the mechanism is specifically showing and only provides a simple caption, with no description of the mechanism whatsoever. Many of the bonds in the mechanism seem to have different lengths and the arrows appear to be distorted with some arrows pointing in an incorrect direction. Also, many of the arrows are different sizes and the figure caption lacks scientific terminology.

Practice Entering Equation: Bohr Radius
$$a_0=\left ( \frac{h^2}{m_e ke^2} \right )$$

Iron-sulfer cluster Article
The main purpose of Smokefoot's two edits were to remove the amount extra words that Ninja Recs used in his edits. Smokefoot believed that Ninja Recs edits could have been revised in order to add more concise information to the page. Smokefoot states in the comments, "Wikipedia is not a school essay. It is a compilation of facts," and edited Ninja Recs work in order to get the information across using less words. The negative numbers under the statistics for these edits represent the amount of characters that were removed by Smokefoot. These edits were indeed necessary as the information on Wikipedia should be concise in order for individuals to quickly receive the information and knowledge they require. ==== Wikipedia “Iron–sulfur cluster " Article ==== Hello,

I hoping to contribute, my knowledge to this article by discussing the strength, covalency and electron transfer effects. Ninja Recs (talk) 01:00, 12 October 2018 (UTC)
 * You are writing at a level that indicates that your teacher is needed. Please ask your teacher to read some Wikipedia articles first. --Smokefoot (talk) 01:20, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Ninja Recs's Instructor gave 58 revisions to make to this contribution before moving to the live article however, regrettably, none of them were made --Kcsunshine999 (talk) 22:46, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

=== Wikipedia “Carbonic anhydrase ” article: === The main purpose of the edits made by Smokefoot were to reduce the redundancy that Bilal.bhatti96 included in his addition of information. Just as the previous article, there were some sentences that were unnecessary and not required in this article about Carbonic Anhydrase. Smokefoot's edits allowed for more concise and important information to remain on the page. Another edit that Smokefoot made was to remove a reference that Bilal.bhatti96 repeated in his work. The negative numbers under the statistics represents the amount of characters that Smokefoot removed from Bilal.bhatti96's edits. The first edit done by Smokefoot at 12:03 on December 3, 2018 was great overall, but includes a small mistake at line 26, where Smokefoot's edit states “The enzyme maintain acid-base balance helps transport carbon dioxide." This sentence does not make sense as it is not grammatically correct, and it was corrected in the future editing history.

The edit made by Bilal.bhatti96 on November 28, 2019 included a well-written paragraph at line 32. This paragraph was a great contribution to the Carbonic Anhydrase article as it still remains on the page to this day, with only a few small grammatical edits that were made later on. In his new paragraph, Bilal.bhatti96 does a great job effectively explaining The Bohr Effect in a concise way and avoids run-on sentences, allowing for it to remain on the article.

There is plenty more discussion in the Talk page of the Carbonic anhydrase article than that of the Iron-sulfer cluster article. Most of the discussion in this Talk page is relevant to the article, but more discussion can definitely be made in order to enhance the article further as there is always something that can be improved on in informational articles such as this.