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DCA Rough Draft
Adding to Paradise Pier heading as a new last paragraph:

On July 15th, 2017, it was announced at the D23 Expo that Disney's California Adventure would be getting a new immersive land, Pixar Pier. This Pixar-themed area will remodel Paradise Pier pier to feature many Disney Pixar characters. California Screaming will be turned into The Incredicoster, based on the 2004 film, The Incredibles. Other additions include: the Adorable Snowman ice cream shop, the Lamp Light Lounge, and an Inside Out ride.

Adding to Live Entertainment Heading:

My source for all this is here

Disney's California Adventure offers an array of entertainment options, including live performances and opportunities for guests to meet characters.

Live Performances:

At the Hyperion Theater, guests can see Frozen the Musical, an hour-long musical version of the film of the same name. The show uses projections and special effects to create the fictional kingdom of Arandelle with Anna, Elsa, Olaf, and Kristoff. Frozen the Musical at the Hyperion Theater opened to the public on May 27th, 2016. This production has a racially diverse cast, contrary to the original film.

Disney Junior Dance Party! is an opportunity for the younger guests to see Disney Junior characters, such as Sofia the First, Doc McStuffins and Timon.

Five and Dime is a traveling street show featuring the musical talents to Dime and her five band mates. They can be seen driving through HollywoodLand in their 1920's style car.

Red Car Newsboys is Disney California Adventure's lively street show featuring singing dancing newsboys and a surprise character visit.

World of Color is a nighttime water and light spectacular which transforms Paradise Bay into a water canvas. This 22 minute water show features scenes from popular Disney and Pixar films and can be used with the Made with Magic ears and accessories. During the holiday season, a holiday version of this show is also offered.

As of April 13th, 2018, Paint the Night Parade will be coming to Disney California Adventure after being in Disneyland a few months before.

Character Experiences:

Anna and Elsa's Royal Welcome is one of the more popular character meet-and-greets in the park. Fastpass is offered for this attraction.

Marvel characters such as Captain America, Spiderman, Thor, and Loki can be found in HollywoodLand.

Guardians of the Galaxy characters appear around the new Guardians of the Galaxy: Mission Breakout attraction.

Response to Feedback
I think the biggest thing that I got from the feedback I was given is my diction and how it needs to be more neutral. I also hadn't thought about linking other Wiki articles for things that I am talking about, like characters or movies. I think I need to find more variety in sources, which might be difficult. News articles would probably be the most reliable and variable source at this point, just because of the stuff I'm talking about. I will also go through and make my diction more neutral.

Disney California Adventure Article Work
Disney California Adventure is the page I have decided to work on for this project. I am excited because I love the park and I have a lot of knowledge about it so I can go straight to finding sources instead of having to educate myself first. The history and timeline are already pretty good so I think I'm gonna focus on Live Entertainment (there is a lot missing, past and present) and the Lands. I think I also want to add a section about what's been announced about the new expansion that opens this summer. Most of my sources will probably be less official than others. They definitely won't be books or journals. They will most likely be newspaper articles, official Disney Parks Blog posts and the Disneyland Resort website. I think that if I take just the facts from these website, it will be ok and unbiased because they are the most reputable company to have released this new information.

Concerning Live Entertainment, I really want to add a section about their fluctuating nighttime concerts and how they changed and now don't exist. I would also add descriptions to the editing ones and add the Frozen Live Show.

Possible Articles for Project
I think that this article about Communication studies could be a really good option because there is a lot of blank space in here and it obviously pertains to this class. I would want to add more about common major requirements, job possibilities, and schools with top programs. I think that this information would be readily available from concrete sources. It was also under start-class media articles.

I think I could possibly add more to Mean Girls (musical) because there is more and more information coming out everyday, even though some details will be hush hush until it starts up again on Broadway. I would want to add more about the plot and similarities to the movie, but I'm not sure how much literature there is about that and I would be relying on my memory of it, which is bad. Maybe I could talk about its reception. And histories of the cast?

I think I would also be interested in adding to Disney California Adventure because there is a lot of new information about Pixar Pier that hasn't been added to this article. Not sure if this relates enough to media, though. I would be able to add a lot about the reception of the parks changes and more about individual attractions.

Sources for DCA Article
Is this how you list sources?