User:Rbovey/Chatfield Hollow State Park/BrieBernier24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rbovey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Chatfield Hollow State Park
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chatfield Hollow State Park
 * Chatfield Hollow State Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead in the article has been updated to cover Chatfield Hollow State Park. The information acknowledges that the public recreation has is 412 acres, establishing it's size and location. The introductory sentence only explains clear facts about the park size and location. The content does not persuade the reader to go to this park, the language only explains facts about the park and it is not bias. All the content talks about the park, it includes it's current status, past history, and geology. The images are referenced in the article along with all of the information. The organization is good in this article, it explains the park, then it gives its history, it also gives information about its geology, and lastly it gives a detailed list of the activities you do at the park. This article has all it's information referenced and to my understanding it meets Wikipedia's notability requirements.