User:Rbrandt4/Art Deco in Paris/WyattS43 Peer Review

General info
Rbrandt4
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rbrandt4/Art_Deco_in_Paris?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Art Deco in Paris

Evaluate the drafted changes
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 * I would recommend to since the article is in english to have the english definitions after a majority of french words
 * For all edits ensure you cite all sources and add the proper notation for it
 * More concise writing would let users read edits easier
 * Link other places such as the Musée des Années to be further explored as well
 * for a few of the more technical terms of art maybe link another Wikipedia page to help better explain the subject to someone that has never heard of it (ex. Bas-reliefs)
 * Great job on finding reliable information and sources there is plenty of depth to be discovered