User:Rbrasted/Prei Khmeng, Cambodia/KiraXMaddox Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I'm reviewing the sandbox draft of the Rbrasted group on the Prei Khmeng, Cambodia site.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rbrasted/Prei_Khmeng%2C_Cambodia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi everyone,

Although it seems there's a lot more space for text body to be added within the different categories, I think you've got a great foundation in which to build from. The intro gives a great, brief introduction to the type of site we are looking at, the appropriate dates, and the types of material evidence and artifacts that have been discovered. You also make great use of hyperlinks that are relevant and give greater context if the reader so wishes to pursue more on the topic. I think your use of citations is also well done and backs up the information and statements make. Within the history section, you might consider adding a topic focusing on the people and society that once inhabited this site if that information is available. I think it could give some context to the artifacts you mention such as the clays, metals, and beads within the artifact section. This could also go in the mortuary section if there's information regarding the remains and if they discuss bone evidence that could provide some insight to the everyday lives of the people found at the cemetery. I like the way the architecture subheadings are organized. They seem very organized and highlight the important features that make up this site. I look forward to seeing what kind of information you can find on it. If you can find images, that would also be a great addition.

I think overall your layout is looking very organized and what text you do have is concise, neutral, and informative with appropriate references after each statement. There's also a great use of dates sprinkled throughout each section. There weren't any issues that jumped out at me as the grammar, information, and use of citations all look in order. I greatly look forward to seeing this page develop and what kind of information you bring to the table.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Kira