User:Rbrasted/Prei Khmeng, Cambodia/Nasimfredj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rbrasted, Crustytoast


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rbrasted/Prei_Khmeng%2C_Cambodia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The abstract of your article is well put together and describes the contents of your article well. (good lead)

The example if the sandstone lintel adds a lot to the article visually which I like and I will also be adding some photos to my article.

I think talking about the raw materials found from excavation or any sort of information regarding what materials they used during that could be a good addition showing how advanced their society was.

Seems like you're getting there but more information on the architectural skills they had would also help paint a picture of how advanced their society was.

I would say the most important things you should add are to fill out what you have under your Features column. You already have good categories there (mounds,temple ect.) although I think the main idea here should be continuing to paint that picture of what their society may have been like. I would add "architecture" if you're able to find information on that.