User:Rbullied/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Discrimination against people with HIV/AIDS

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is the wiki article my group has decided to edit/enhance for our course. We feel that it is an important article because it deal with the cultural and societal impact of HIV/AIDs through discussion of continued discrimination. My preliminary impression is that the basics of the article are good, but it can be updated to reflect more detail and modern developments in relationship to 2020/21 (ex. COVID-19).

Evaluate the article
This article provides good information but can be updated to reflect current developments in the realm of discrimination against people with HIV/AIDS. The lead section provides an overview of discrimination forms without diving in the medical diagnosis of HIV/AIDS. The body content can be expanded and updated to address the impact of COVID-19 and provide more information on Blood donation restrictions. The tone reads neutral and unbiased. Relevant sources from 2020 (less than a year ago) are included. No spelling or grammar errors are noted. No images or content are included. The talk page is fairly inactive. The most recent activity is undated.