User:Rbwood/Tropical disease/Subaitar34 Peer Review

General info
Here I'll be reviewing Rebecca Blackwood's (Rbwood) edits on Tropical Disease.

Lead
The lead wasn't updated by my peer, only a certain section of this article. From the original article, it does include a descriptive introductory sentence and a brief overview of what the article will go over. I'm not sure why the sentence on tropical medicine is present because I don't see any other part in the article that talks about the history of tropical medicine the way it's implied here. There is a section on treatment and prevention, though I think the lead can be better to reflect that.

However, that is just one specific details on where it can improve. As a whole, this article has an effective, solid lead.

Content
The content added makes the article much more organized and does add good detail to the methods of prevention and treatment. It does seem up-to-date and relevant. There doesn't seem to be a lot of content added altogether, but the quality is good.

Tone and Balance
Everything that's been added is neutral and fact-based, without any particular bias present. It's mostly an update on the methods used to treat tropical diseases, so there's no room for opinion or debate here, I think.

Sources and References
I think my biggest question here is I don't see any sources cited to back anything up. Maybe there was an error in the copying and pasting (if it was done from the Read tab instead of the Edit tab maybe?), but none of the added information is cited by anything either. It seems incomplete in its references.

Organization
The content added is very well written and clear. It adds a very needed aspect of organization that sets a premise for more input on specific details. So, the edits for organization are really helpful and significant here.

Overall impressions
I think overall this was a good move to improve the article and the content added was well written, clear, and added a major upgrade in organization for their chosen section which makes it seem more complete. Now all it needs is the sources, but other than that these are good improvements!