User:Rcia0302/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Provide a link to the article here.) David L. Hill

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

The reason why I choose this article is because it relates to my course that I am taking. It matters because one of the topics we learned about was the Manhattan Project and David L. Hill was a physicist who worked on the project. My impression on the article was that it seemed short compared to others, not much Information given/listed.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

I do think this article is well written. There are some parts that can use improvements like the "Early life" section could have more Information explaining who David. L Hill, maybe where he went to school and got his degrees. I also think the "World War II" section could have more in it because it seems to be a big part of his life and what he did.