User:Rdano001/Cradle of Humankind/Naylay10 Peer Review

The first sentence of the second paragraph has a typo. Everything else looks okay. I noticed that my article on Lake Turkana is considered the cradle of life. It would be nice to maybe mention the difference between the cradle of humankind and the cradle of life.

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