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Proofing of References: Vance, Cyrus. "Final Report of Cyrus R. Vance Concerning the Detroit Riots". lbjlib.utexas.edu. LBJ Library. Retrieved 10 December 2013.
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Chikota, Richard A. and Michael C. Moran. Riot in the Cities: An Analytical Symposium on the Causes and Effects. Fairleigh Dickinson University Press, 1970. 176. Retrieved from Google News on February 22, 2010. ISBN 0-8386-7443-7 ,  ISBN 978-0-8386-7443-7.
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^ https://www.michigan.gov/documents/dnr/mhc_mag_phooie-on-louie_308397_7.pdf&ved=0ahUKEwilmu_hmKLVAhUL_mMKHfNGA9kQFghFMAQ&usg=AFQjCNEoPoOM2fWgv3eacB7fpSyA8vihww Windsor, The (2007-07-22). "1967 riot chronology". Retrieved 2011-04-24. "Who’s Gonna Clean Up This Mess?". 2005-07-01. Archived from the original on 2007-07-19. Retrieved 2007-11-14 https://www.pbs.org/wgbh/amex/eyesontheprize/profiles/57_mi.html
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 * 1)  "[Text of Final Report of Cyrus R. Vance Concerning the Detroit Riots" ]. Archived from the original on 7 June 2011. Retrieved 2011-04-24.
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 * 1)  "This Day In History>>1967 THE 12TH STREET RIOT". Retrieved 2007-11-14.
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 * 1)  Sidney, Fine (1987). "Rioters and Judges: The Response of the Criminal Justice System to the Detroit Riot of 1967". Wayne Law Review. 33 (5): 1723–1764. Retrieved 29 July 2012.
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 * 1)  "The Detroit Riots of 1967". Retrieved 2011-04-24.
 * 2) "The Detroit Riots of 1967: Events". Retrieved 2011-04-24.

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 * Sgt. Mortimer J. LeBlanc, 41, admitted firing the burst into the windows of the apartmeant where Tanya was found after another Guardsman told him that sniper fire had come from of the apartment’s windows. Tanya’s mother, June, sought $100,000 damages on grounds that Sgt. LeBlanc, who was exonerated, fired negligently into the apartments. [changed is seeking to sought]


 * After the police left, the crowd began looting an adjacent clothing store. Shortly thereafter, full-scale looting began throughout the neighborhood. State police, Wayne County sheriffs, and the Michigan National Guard were alerted, but because it was Sunday, it took hours for the Police Commissioner Ray Girardin to assemble sufficient manpower. [Citation needed]
 * The pastor of Grace Episcopal Church along 12th Street reported that he saw a "gleefulness in throwing stuff and getting stuff out of buildings." [Punctuation added]