User:Rdow/Language attrition/Simpson Hannah Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Rdow


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the content that was added is strong but I think that a source is needed to be able to back those statements up.