User:Rdow/Language attrition/Tedrickja Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rdow


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 * User:Rdow/Language attrition


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language attrition

Evaluate the drafted changes
This sandbox edit does a thorough job of detailing the processes and mechanism by which language attrition occurs. It goes into sufficient detail regarding how language attrition is thought to be able to be prevented. Perhaps some more specific examples could be cited, to provide more concrete detail. I think that the comparison to language acquisition is not entirely applicable, as the two processes are in a sense the inverse of one another. I believe that the overall content of the article has ben improved, by providing greater detail on the subject. I do not see where you input your citations, although I am unfamiliar with viewing sandbox edits, and so I may have missed that aspect of your draft. Overall, a good contribution.