User:Rdow/Language attrition/Zerocarey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rdow


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rdow/Language_attrition?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language attrition

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The citation you used is related to our course materials and reliable but I am not sure you need the letter a next to the year because you are not citing Cystal again. Im not entirely sure so check me on that. It is hard to decipher which part of the article you are working since you put a few paragraphs into your sandbox. I would make it look easier to read by only putting in your sand box what your are directly working on instead of the entire lead. I am not sure you have actually edited the article in any way by the time I am doing this review so I cannot review that part of the assignment.