User:ReZappert124/Peasiella tantilla/Aaralyn02 Peer Review

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“For reproduction, Peaseilla tantilla used sexual reproduction in order to reproduce”

The word “reproduce” is used three times in this sentence, you might be able to change it to

something like.. In regards to reproduction, the Peasiella tantilla does so sexually.

Thank you for the feedback I'll make sure to try and vary my word choice more when talking about this topic.
“Their marine habitat is the marine benthic[1], and they reside in the Indo-Pacific[2].

Peasiella tantilla is abundant along the coast of the supratidal region.[3]Peasiella tantilla

are also found in abundance in Hawaii”

Going along with what Professor added in for her comments, maybe starting off with, saying

they reside all over the ocean in the supratidal region(if they aren’t found everywhere, which

oceans are they found in), and then go into where they specifically live; in the rocks, floating, in

the sand, etc..

I'll make sure to add where they live specifically.

Other than that, I enjoyed reading this article as it was easy to follow along and it taught

me new things. Excellent work!

Thanks for all the feedback I really appreciate it at I can use it to make my work better, I see where you are coming from on all points and I will try and consider all of the feedback while making my final edits.