User:Reaelise13/Haemophilus influenzae/Ash0315 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a good amount of information present regarding the Diagnosis section of the article as well as the serotypes however, I would suggest switching the Disease and Diagnosis sections to help the flow of information as it feels like a break in the cohesiveness. I would also recommend more information regarding the disease and some specificity in terms of whether the section is about the mechanism of action of the disease, symptoms, etc. The available pictures were good at visualizing the scope of the infection. I think that the genome section is slightly confusing as I am not sure what exactly it is explaining between the strands discussed.