User:Reaelise13/Haemophilus influenzae/Hart Hequembourg Peer Review

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Article: Haemophilus influenzae In the first paragraph you should remove the sentence "The bacterium was argued by some to be the cause of influenza.[1]" because you are not supposed to speak for a general audience instead you should have direct reference or source where you got this info from. Besides that the lead looks good but should include info about what will be discussed later in the article. The images throughout the article look good. The overall layout/organization of the article looks good.