User:ReaganCSMC

Potential Articles

Reasons for Changes:
 * Ready, Set, PrEP
 * 2004 Kumbakonam School fire
 * Tea in the United Kingdom
 * Larry Bright
 * College Scholastic Ability Test
 * Hurricane Luis

'''Ready, Set. PrEP'''


 * Some sections of the articles come across as wordy and hard to read.
 * The organization and formatting of the article could use some adjustments.
 * Graphics could possibly be added to direct the reading.

2004 Kumbakonam School fire


 * The main thing I saw here was the organization of ideas.
 * I feel as if we could change the order of the last three sub sections.
 * I also think we could work on sentence structure, grammar, and flow.

Tea in the United Kingdom


 * This article could be revised for word repetition and word choice.

Larry Bright


 * This article could be edited for spelling and grammar.
 * Citations could also be added to this article.

College Scholastic Ability Test


 * This article could be edited for spelling and cohesion.

Hurricane Luis


 * This article could be edited for organization.
 * Spelling and grammar could also be a focus of editing.

Article Changes History

2004 Kumbakonam School fire


 * The editing here has not changed the format by any drastic means.
 * Most of the editing has come in the form of grammar and translating.
 * The article originally had text that needed to be translated.
 * The only major formatting changes I could find was the addition of the Victims subsection.

'''Ready, Set. PrEP'''


 * The editing here has not significantly changed the formatting in any way.
 * There was some formatting changes that occurred in line one.
 * The edit on February 11th 2021 added external links and multiple issues to said line.
 * There were also more lines added throughout the editing history.
 * The original page had seventy-three lines and the current page has seventy-seven lines.