User:RealSpill27/Music psychology/E3B21 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Your proposed changes look really good; the flow is definitely improved in that section. Looks like the article is pretty lengthy and could use some help in a few different areas. I think this section definitely did need some revision, so you made some good changes. There wasn't really an outline for your proposed changes, and I didn't get a feel for what you wanted to really do overall. You're doing a good job so far, though! I would keep looking for resources.