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Article Evaluation
I choose the article on Masculinity. Everything in this article is relevant. But all throughout the article there were obvious trigger words and a long with what we talked about in class all you see throughout the article is words related to that of the man.

In my opinion the article is not neutral it has more of a negative connotation towards men and women. Yes the idea that masculinity in woman directly refer to being a lesbian is very biased.

The viewpoint under "herbivore men" is very underrepresented. One should provide more examples of these men in the real world. And, why can't masculinity take in the roles of these herbivore men in order to broaden and open up the idea of masculinity as a whole.

The few citations that I checked took me to a source that when the paragraph was read made sense afterwards.

Most of the citations are from reliable sources most are very biased coming from only one perspective while other instead of coming from a really credible source in return come from a website that end with .com

I see that the psychology of masculinity is on here but I fail to see the sociology behind this. I believe this is a much needed aspect on this view. Why is it not here? Is sociology referred most to a woman's subject? The woman part is also out of date. Masculinity is indeed still sadly seen in that way but many women portray masculinity and are idolized such as Serena Williams.

In the talk page I found many people commenting on biased that they came across as well as the need for expanding of certain topics such as race in masculinity. But, all in all everyone is very respectful.

There are 4 wikiprojects associated with this topic. All but three are rated B- class and the last one is a star-class.

The way this topic is talked about here is obviously more dense in information but it actually does not seem to mention the "man box" or a reference to the film we watched as an assignment which is perfectly fine. But, then I did a wiki search on these two things and came to the conclusion that they do not even co-exist with this word at all or in general. Definite room for improvement though.

Article I choose ( Women of Color Resource Center)
On my article I will plan on adding information of the founders of women of color resources as well as to try to find the 5 objectives mentioned.