User:Realestsky333/Shooting guard/412DRS Peer Review

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Realestsky333


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 * User:Realestsky333/Shooting guard


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 * Shooting guard

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like all of the information that was added. The first two sections I thought gave decent points, but the edits added provided a clear understanding of what it takes to be a good shooting guard. I thought all of the points had a neutral point of view and were to the point. I do think that a little more information to the sections below “Skills and Qualities” wouldn’t hurt, but they all seem to have a good amount of facts. I like how most of your sections come from many sources. I’m not sure if you have a source for “Skill and Qualities”, but if you do, I would provide a citation at the end. Like I said earlier, all of the content is very clear and I didn’t seem to notice any grammar errors. One thing I would suggest would be if there are any possible new wikilinks you could add to your new sections, I would do so. Other than that, I thought this was very well put together and gave a great understanding of your topic.