User:Realityandexistence00/Floating man/Xxbaileyxx4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Realityandexistence00


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Floating man - Wikipedia
 * Floating man - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is good overall, although I would say that the "Background" part is not really talking about the background, it seems to be giving more of a definition.