User:ReataH/Wyoming Governor's Mansion/McCoy Mcsanchez Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ReataH


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:ReataH/Wyoming Governor's Mansion - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wyoming Governor's Mansion - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - Your lead is very informative and well-made but could use some grammar work.

Content - The information you have added is very informative, and a great change from the previous article adding the history of the building to the page. Perhaps add a section with some brief info on Charles Murdock, and maybe something notable about one of the govenerers that lived here if you can find anything particularly interesting like that. Also give the whole piece a look over for grammar and spelling. Other than that, the updating info looks great!

Tone - Your updated article has good tone throughout.

Sources - Seem likes good sources. Look for more but so far so good!

Organization - Your thoughts seem well organized but need more formal formatting, like headers. Perhaps create a whole section on the interior and include pictures of the interior of the building.

Images - Add captions to your added images, I would also add some interior pictures of the building and maybe some older pictures to if any can be found. Maybe to add a picture of Charles Murdock.

Overall - Your additions to the article are fantastic adding a lot of historical and styling information. You have added a good amount of information to the page, but I think you need to work on formatting and kind of finalizing the piece to make it more presentable. Overall, though very good work!