User:Rebeccamweintraub/Domestic Violence in Uganda/Rebeccamweintraub Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vsrddy92


 * Link to article you're reviewing
 * Violence against women in Uganda

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

- The lead was very recently updated to reflect the changes made by the editor. The opening sentence does a great job introducing the article and it also makes sure to outline the different pieces of the article that will come later.

- The lead could be improved by more specifically saying that the outlined information is what will be discussed later in the article, setting up a map for the reader can be helpful.

Content:

- The content added is clearly very relevant to the topic, with sections on background, statistics, implications, and changing policy.

- Many of the source utilized are from the last decade, emphasizing the current relevance and up to date information. Also, by including a section on COVID it is clear that the information is recent.

- The content clearly addresses an equity gap by focusing on women in an African country.

Tone and Balance:

- The author does well remaining neutral, even on a topic that can lead to passionate arguments for reform.

- the section on background does well laying the groundwork for the discussion of the issue without making an argument.

Sources and References:

- The author does a good job ensuring that all facts and claims are backed up by a source.

- The references included are reliable, academic sources.

- The links work and the references section is well organized.

Organization:

- I think that the organization is one of the key strengths of the additions to the article. I appreciate how it goes from background, to more information, and also includes COVID as a subsection in implications.

- The added content is well written and easy to read.

Images and Media:

- One way to improve the article would be to add images or media to the page to make it more engaging. Possibly a graph outlining one of the mentioned statistics or an image of women in the country would be useful.

New Article:

- The draft definitely meets the requirement and utilizes important academic sources that add an essential piece of information to wikipedia.

Overall Impressions:

- I am impressed by the thoroughness of your addition and the quality of your sources!

- Nicely done!