User:Rebekah.a.epps/Military sexual trauma/Sims1109 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)Rebekah.a.epps


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rebekah.a.epps/Military sexual trauma
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Military sexual trauma

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I would recommend you to help condense but summarize the definition of military sexual trauma and how it affects people while their in the military and outside the military. However your draft article is very informational giving me insight on the culture of sexual harmasmet and how the military handles these situations when they occur in there units.