User:Rebekah Greenwood/Passerini reaction/Kyall P Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sheryl Munshan, Sganz3, Rebekah Greenwood


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rebekah%20Greenwood/Passerini_reaction?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Passerini reaction

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your lead is well constructed around the topics which follow. You mention the history of the reaction in the lead, but have no history section, so a little section on history may be nice for organizational purposes. The content added is well referred to by references. One thing I like from the original page that is not in your draft is the reaction scheme at the top of the page. Your page is well organized. There are a couple of run-on sentences in your application area. Other than an addition of a possible history section and a couple of grammatical fixes your page looks great for a rough draft.